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Fifty Shades of BDSM

Fifty Shades of BDSM

Fifty Shades of BDSM

Melita has lived a charmed life, raised sheltered by her family and romanced by her best friend Liam through her teen years. Her world is turned upside down when she is sent to New York to meet the man she has been promised to, handsome multibillionaire Jack Kemble. Leaving behind everything she’s ever known for a man she’s never met proves to be more challenging than Melita could have imagined, especially when Jack requests that she spend a week at a BDSM school in California.

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3 Responses to “Fifty Shades of BDSM”

  1. SuperCurvyGirl "pfffft" says:
    18 of 20 people found the following review helpful
    1.0 out of 5 stars
    Disgusting, vile, worthless read. Does not portray BDSM well, December 2, 2013
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    This review is from: Fifty Shades of BDSM (Kindle Edition)
    I just couldn’t finish reading this. Firstly, the protagonist is joining a publicly-known millionaire in an arranged marriage and they never met once. Secondly, her family ships her off like a fruit cake and they’re never heard from again. Thirdly, she is in love with a childhood friend but they’ve never dated or kissed, despite the feelings being absolutely reciprocated, Fourth, her “fiancé” shows her his dungeon of BDSM and it’s completely laughable. She’s 100% vaginal and shaking like a leaf.
    This author knows nothing of BDSM culture. It’s horrible. Statistically speaking, a high-powered executive will more often seek a Dominant partner to offset the overwhelming control they maintain in business.
    Asking a VIRGIN to be a Submissive is a no-no, unless that is what they’re seeking.
    This character neither wanted nor desired to be submissive.
    This would have been a more compelling read if the woman was trained to be a Dominant.

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  2. Blueox says:
    13 of 15 people found the following review helpful
    4.0 out of 5 stars
    Hot, but …, April 11, 2013
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    Blueox

    This review is from: Fifty Shades of BDSM (Kindle Edition)
    all the misspelled and misused words took my mind away from the story. Where was the editor?? Being new to Amazon e-books (hard to believe anybody still could be) I didn’t realize that anything given away free, really isn’t. This isn’t a book as advertised. Even though the description says only 35 pages I expected at least a short story. This is a CHAPTER, and the misleading labeling makes me angry. This is nothing but bait and switch. My problem is that I’ve taken the bait, hook, line and sinker and I want to read the rest, so whuchya gonna do?

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  3. C. L. Mathew says:
    5 of 5 people found the following review helpful
    1.0 out of 5 stars
    It’s not a book, not even a short story, February 9, 2014
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    C. L. Mathew (Norcross, GA United States) –
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    This review is from: Fifty Shades of BDSM (Kindle Edition)
    What a waste. This isn’t a “book”. It’s not a first book of a trilogy. It’s not a novelette. It’s not a short story. This is one chapter of a possible “book”. I’m all for fiction and fantasy, but this is so unrealistic and so unfinished it’s not worth reading, in my not so humble opinion. You want to introduce a vanilla partner to bdsm? You go to a bdsm 101 seminar with them. You fill out a checklist of interests, together. You watch some videos or read some erotica, together. A billionaire sending his vanilla arranged marriage fiance off to a bdsm training school is just silly. Oops. Sorry for the spoiler, that was the entire plot of this “book”. Seeing what the curriculum was at the school might have been interesting, but this “book” doesn’t go that far. It’s free, but not worth your time.

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